Some people believe that robots will replace classroom teacher in the near future. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many people believe
robots
will be alternative
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classroom
instructor
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very soon. I
competely
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completely
disagree with
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i
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will explain why it is not possible. In
classroom
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teacher
is the key part
for
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study
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environment. At
this
moment
a lots
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of humans think
classroom
teacher
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will replace by
robots
.
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what will be held but
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think is not possible. In the
classroom
, maintaining
studens
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student
students
and
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providing
valubale
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valuable
lecture
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is difficult
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but
lecturer
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the lecturer
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made it properly.
For instance
, when
teacher
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a teacher
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asked pupils for homework
on
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that moment. teachers
tech
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teach
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us naturally.
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they judge about the progress and pupils to how he/she .
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it is proved that class
teacher
is a great impact.
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, young people love to follow
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classroom
tclassroom
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teacher
as
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idol
On the other hand
, without
robots
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there
are
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a lot of
way
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to make
classroom
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interesting. Some humans think
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neat
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future. Now technology has a great
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of
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tool
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. by using artificial
engineeringg
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engineering
it is really common like
robopts
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robots
. The use of
robots
in many
sector
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of industry,
specially
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for
high risk
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work.
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some
scients
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science
invented auto
cadriving
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driving
, difficult surgery,
also
some
robots
work as a waiter. By
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from
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that things
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some humans believe in
future
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robots
will be our
teacher
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teachers
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. In conclusion, the idea of
robots
studing
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studying
standing
at
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classroom
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is not good.I
am completely disagree
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with
this
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