Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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keeps on running
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it is good to accept bad
situations
and move forward. These
situations
bring out the real capability of a
person
. Either acceptance of
bad
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situation
or keeping that
situation
aside to improve oneself depends upon the
situation
what the
person
is present. In
this
essay, my views regarding the topic along with some examples are given. It is a good thing to accept a bad
situation
. If one makes
a
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right choice by selecting so, it not only brings him out of bad times but
also
gives him a chance to know what he is capable of.
For example
, If a
person
is unable to sustain his family due to the lack of employment any
job
he gets with a basic salary will definitely be a boon for him.
besides
getting a
job
he is
also
getting
a way
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to sustain his family.
moreover
, If he performs well here it shapes him to build a better future. There are many chances that a
person
gets to prove himself. Not every
chace
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he gets may flourish his future. So, there will be some
situations
where one needs to think wisely before making a decision.
For example
, a student attended an interview and got selected for that. If the student is not satisfied with that
job
and somehow knows that the position he got in that
job
is not worth him,
then
there is no need to accept that offer. Because, if he is standing a better chance, accepting the
job
may not build a good path for his future. In either
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situations
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one needs to think clearly and take decisions.
Finally
, Some people say that it is best to accept bad
situations
and some say that it will be better if we try to improve
such
situations
. But in my point of view, either of the given two choices depends upon the
situation
that a
person
is in. If the
person
is in need
then
he needs to make a choice to go ahead.
Otherwise
, he can wait for an
oppurtunity
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that improves his
situation
.
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