Pollution of rivers, lakes and seas is a major concern for people who seek to protect the environment. What are the possible causes of water pollution, solutions?

Water
pollution seems to be a growing problem for many countries.
This
essay will discuss the reasons for the same
inculding
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including
, emissions from cars, factories, and other human activities.
This
dissertation will
also
discuss the solutions for
water
pollution
inculding
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including
, dumping of resources into landfills, and plastic
waste
reduction. To commence with,
water
contamination seems to be a serious problem.
This
can cause by emissions from cars , factories and other human activities
such
as
irrigration
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irrigation
.
Moreover
, the pollutant particles cause
contaminate
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contamination
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of
rain
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rainwater
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water
run-off.
Furthermore
, it goes into
water
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the water
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cycle through rivers and streams;
therefore
,
filternation
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filtration
and processing are not viable
option
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options
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to clean the
water
at
such
volume. To exemplify, oil discharge from factories, chemical spills are some of its examples.
Thus
,
pollution
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the pollution
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of
water
is an alarming situation. On the flip side, dumping of resources into landfills and plastic
waste
reduction are some of its
solution
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solutions
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to mitigate the issue. The level of plastic
waste
into seas have been increasing day by day and becoming
an obstacles
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an obstacle
obstacles
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for
speices
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species
where poaching, hunting are among serious issues concerns.
In addition
, it has
effect
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an effect
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on human lives for those who
consumes
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consume
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meat products, as pollutants particles
where
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were
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consumed by the
speices
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species
spice
.
Therefore
, dumping
of
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apply
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waste
products
on
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in
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landfill
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landfills
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is essential. To conclude, overall it has been observed that emissions and dumping of resources are the serious
problem
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problems
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of
water
contamination which is harmful
for
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to
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both humans and animals lives.
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