Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside urban centres. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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people’s lives. Leading to

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argument, many entrepreneurs nowadays plan to settle workplaces or factories from urban

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to the outside urban

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. In my opinion, even though moving to the rural

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may reduce the company costs and expand job capacity, it would be harmful to the

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and the communities. Many companies have considered that setting outside the city’s

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may be helpful for the companies’ finance reduction. Due to the fact that retention, transportation, and living cost in the

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are pricey, rural

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might be a better choice for getting the bigger area’s size and having a lower cost.

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, it would be advantageous

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for the originating community.

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can be seen as a great opportunity for rural people to get a job.

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, not only moving out from the city decreases the business cost, but

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increases job capacity for the community.

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, constructing the offices, factories, and industries would result in a large effect on the

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. It is indeed that the transportation may only be convenient while travelling in the city.

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means that the transportation system is limited so that the company’s owner would decide to build not only the workplace

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accommodations for workers.

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,

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action would harm both the surrounding zone and animals’ habitats.

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, many of the northern provinces of Thailand used to be green

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full of animals, but after the booming of industries, these animals today could be considered

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extinct animals with dry grounds.

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, it could be seen from many happened examples that the effect of how the business comes

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According to both arguments on the positive and negative sides of moving companies to outside urban centres, I strongly disagree with the opinion as its impacts should not be ignored. It would be better to manage the area into a specific zone of

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purpose, so the economy and

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could be together without any harm.