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the charts below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US

the charts below show information about honey-bee colonies and honey production in the US
#show #information #honey-bee #colonies #honey #production
The charts give information about the number of
honey
-bee
colonies
 and the
amount
 of
honey
production
 in the US between 1970 and 2010. In general, in 1980, the number of
honey
-bee
colonies
were
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 the highest number
the
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apply
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during
this
priod
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period
.
On the other hand
, the largest
amount
 of
honey
production
were
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 in 1976,
Overall
, in 2010, the
colonies
 and
honey
 had the lowest rates. From 1970 to 1980 the
colonies
 rose and they reached just up 4
millions
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million
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. After 1980, the numbers went down each year till 2010.
According
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 the chart, in 2010, there were just under 2
millions
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million
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. The
amount
 of
honey
production
 fell to 110000 tonnes from 1970 to 1980.
However
, the
colonies
 decreased during the same
priod
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period
. Afterwards,
this
amount
 increased to 120000 tonnes in 1990. Between 1990 and 2010,
honey
production
 dropped each year in 2010 it was
the
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less
amount
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Basic structure: Use less body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 75%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words colonies, amount, honey, production with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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