People doing dangerous sporting activities likescuba-diving and bungee-jumping should be responsible for their own safety. Rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people doing those sports. Do you agree ordisagree?

A lot of people loved to do challenging and thrilling sport nowadays even

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dangerous.

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essay will argue that

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workers are not responsible

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their lives just in case they needed help. I completely disagree

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statement above.

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of all,

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workers must help others because regarding

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their name "

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" meaning they should be there if you needed them.

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, scuba-diving

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especially if you are

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a newbie

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.

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, my cousin loves the ocean and wanted to try scuba-diving but

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, she

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need to do training and must know the steps on how to do it, but since it will be her

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time she will be with someone who is trained on doing scuba-diving to company her at the end of the day to make sure of her safety.

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, bungee-jumping is one of the dangerous

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I've known, because of that, you need to jump up to down and

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very high.

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, you must really need a

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worker

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stands

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downstairs if got

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, my friend Princess recently tried

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and I saw her videos jumping on a very high spot, but she mentioned that a lot of

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workers was there to help if needed and

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really a must for me though I have not

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before. To conclude, dangerous

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like scuba-diving and bungee-jumping must have a

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worker because saving lives is a must.

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,

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responsible

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for their own safety we should

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their safety so a lot of people will try

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this activity

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activities

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even

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dangerous.