One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

In the 21st century, due to the improvements

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technologies, the production of

cars

has advanced in many ways. Thurs,

traffic

jams have become a major challenge faced by most of the urban areas in the world. Governments should take

actions

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for

this

problem and increase the quality of rules and regulations for

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public transport.

Firstly

, one of the prime reasons

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traffic

congestion in

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the metropolis

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metropolis

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is the soaring

numbers

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of automobiles on the road. More and more people are likely to drive private

cars

as they feel more comfortable rather than using public transportations.

Moreover

, in some

houses

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there are lots of private

cars

.

For instance

, in my country, most of the people who can effort

cars

have two

cars

at least.

Hence

, it becomes the main

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of

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traffic

jams and even worst

at

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the

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seasons

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.

In addition

, the inefficient use of buses has become another major cause of

this

problem. It is true that buses and trains are not reliable and pleasant. So, the citizens use

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private

cars

as they feel more secure with

it

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. There are certain measures

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be taken to deal with

this

situation .

However

, the government and

public

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should be pragmatic about

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actions.

Initially

, the government should provide cycle lanes and platforms to encourage people to use bicycles or walking from the platform

instead

of using

cars

.

Secondly

, the government should make rules about having only two

cars

in a home.

Finally

, they should ensure reliable and

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ride

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for public transports. To sum up, there are

variety

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a variety

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of different solutions to solve

this problems

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.Eventually ,

by

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developing public transport and introducing innovative regulations can

be reduce

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the

traffic

problems.