Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world. Discussed both views.

In recent

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, the disputed question of what educational levels are suitable for the youth has attracted people’s attention. Some educators suggest that completing

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in university is a key to success, while others oppose that pursuing a

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school academic record directly gain

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real experience as

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and my opinion in

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will be given. On the on side of the argument, there are a variety of reasons why achieving a bachelor’s

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are more essential,

firstly

,

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certificates absolutely provide abundant

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opportunities offering

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both well-known local and multinational organizations as graduated students are the main target for

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hunting.

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advisor and

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to many influential businesses and institutions, has solely

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qualified candidates completing

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or master’s

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in the pre-screen process.

In addition

, some professions require a high academic background related to the complexity

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descriptions.

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and financial

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to perform

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comprehensive accounting tasks.

On the other hand

, the opposes may

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that the tuition fee in colleges

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extremely exorbitant.

In particular

, the statistic shows that students have been eliminated to study in the university about 75% of

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student population in Thailand thanks to financial problem.

As a result

,

initially

pursuing a career after twelve grades would be the considered point.

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,

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development contributes living wage to the students without depending on families’ allowances, and they can immediately gain hands-on experience. To explain, some people prefer to run their own businesses

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all factors, it seems to me that both sides of the argument have their merits. Personally, I am inclined to believe that a good investment always pays the dividend in terms of education since

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qualification requirement basically comes with more benefits.