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Many people say that the only way to guarantee a good job is to complete a course of university education. Others claim that it is better to start work after school and gain experience in the world. Discussed both views.

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In recent
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, the disputed question of what educational levels are suitable for the youth has attracted people’s attention. Some educators suggest that completing
certificate
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 in university is a key to success, while others oppose that pursuing a
job
 after receiving
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 school academic record directly gain
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real experience as
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.
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 and my opinion in
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 will be given. On the on side of the argument, there are a variety of reasons why achieving a bachelor’s
degree
 are more essential,
firstly
,
degree
 certificates absolutely provide abundant
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job
 opportunities offering
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 both well-known local and multinational organizations as graduated students are the main target for
job
 hunting.
For example
, McKinsey & Company,
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 advisor and
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 to many influential businesses and institutions, has solely
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 qualified candidates completing
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degree
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 or master’s
degree
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 in the pre-screen process.
In addition
, some professions require a high academic background related to the complexity
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job
 descriptions.
Accountant
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 and financial
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,
for instance
, need the employees
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capability
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comprehensive accounting tasks.
On the other hand
, the opposes may
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 that the tuition fee in colleges
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 extremely exorbitant.
In particular
, the statistic shows that students have been eliminated to study in the university about 75% of
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 student population in Thailand thanks to financial problem.
As a result
,
initially
 pursuing a career after twelve grades would be the considered point.
Moreover
,
this
 development contributes living wage to the students without depending on families’ allowances, and they can immediately gain hands-on experience. To explain, some people prefer to run their own businesses
such
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account
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all factors, it seems to me that both sides of the argument have their merits. Personally, I am inclined to believe that a good investment always pays the dividend in terms of education since
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job
 qualification requirement basically comes with more benefits.
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