The best way to help underachieving pupils is to have compulsory after school activities which they must attend. This way they will become more involved in school and their grades will improve. To what extent do you agree?

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mandatory class attendance is necessary after

school

activities for underachieving

students

to make them more involved in their

school

works and to achieve better grades. I completely agree that attending extra

classes

after

school

should be compulsory because it will help

students

to get

extra

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attention

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their tutors and they will grow

interest

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in their studies.

Firstly

, attending

classes

after

school

will give the underachieving pupils a chance to get

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attention of their teachers and to communicate with them. In regular

classes

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there are many

students

and it is often not possible for a teacher to give full concentration

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every

students

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.

Thus

, some

students

who are a bit

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than others fall back and they do not come forward in the class for their teacher’s help because of shyness.

Therefore

, extra

classes

give the opportunity to both

teacher

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teachers

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and poor

students

to communicate and overcome their problems. A

student

can ask the teacher any questions without any hesitation and overcome his weakness.

This

will help all the weak

students

to become confident about themselves and encourage them to involve in more

school

activities.

Secondly

, by attending additional

classes

underachieving

students

will get more chances to practice their

school

tasks which will clear their concepts and will grow

interests

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in those specific topics. As it is said that, practice makes a man perfect, it

is

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also

goes for the weak

students

as well. By

practicing

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a topic

that is

hard

to

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a

student

will help him to understand it and when the concept gets clear the

student

start to grow

interest

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in his studies. Increasing interests will help the

student

do better in his examination and achieve good grades. In conclusion, additional

classes

after

school

for weak

students

is necessary for overcoming their weakness and to develop

interest

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an interest

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in their

school

activities.