Young people are often the first to suffer when job opportunities are scarce. In which ways does age affect employment opportunities? How might employers deal with the issue fairly?

Sporting has become a topic of broad interest. Some people maintain that becoming host of major sporting

events

such

as football world cup or the

olympics

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will have some advantages to the

country

.

However

, there have some fees

can

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that can

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be excessive and may

be divert

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divert

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money from other important areas.

This

essay will pinpoint the benefit of hosting

a

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sporting

events

and in my view,

this

trend will affect the financial implications. Admittedly, there are several benefits associated with

this

issue.

Firstly

, their

country

will increase the profile.

For example

, when the football world cup is organized in Canada, Canada will become famous, many people know

this

country

and visit. That helps the development’s tourism.

Secondly

, being a host of major sporting

events

will make citizens proud of their

country

and have

a

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good thinking about sports.

For instance

, when hosting

a sporting

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sporting events

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events

, that

events

will be supported by their citizens and promote people to play more sports.

In other words

, hosting

a sporting

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a sporting event

sporting events

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events

will increase the profile’s

country

and help citizens have

a

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good thinking about sports.

However

, in my

opinion

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this

trend is not completely beneficial, there are some negative aspects that affect the financial implications.

Firstly

, in order to host

a major sporting

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major sporting events

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events

, their

country

will pay some

fee

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fees

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,

tax

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taxes

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to build a stadium.

For example

, the tax will increase every year, if they are not careful, they will lose money or go bankrupt.

Secondly

, In conclusion,

this

issue could bring about certain benefits, but its negative consequences should not be overlooked. As a matter of fact,

this

issue has some serious negative

affects

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effects

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the

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financial implications.