Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Certain companies focus on the overall personality of their employees, while others give more importance to productivity over physical

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viewpoints and will share my opinion on the subject matter.

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, I will explain the benefits of dressing smartly and

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, I will shed light on the positives of working hard.

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of all,

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plays a pivotal role in creating a good

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impression of our personality type. People with good dressing sense, find it easier to generate confidence

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intrinsically

and express their thought process in a meaningful way.

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of

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, they perform exceptionally well in their line of work, contributing immensely to their employer's success.

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, government bodies

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as the defence sector

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employs a strict code of regulations, when it comes to physical

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has resulted in

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of the workers and

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of the necessary discipline required to excel in these fields.

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, giving preference to the quality of work undertaken by a person

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of their external

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will greatly help in narrowing down the target area for a company. Any organisation should largely focus

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achieving a particular objective,

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- profits. Over here, the primary efforts should be taken towards the completion of their ultimate goal. Companies

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as Google and Facebook can be taken as prime examples of

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an organizational model. Employees here are more

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achieving their end result rather than putting efforts

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becoming presentable on the external side. In conclusion, both viewpoints function differently for different types of businesses and will be difficult to choose from. In my opinion, noticing a person's

hardwork

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hard work

should be given utmost preference rather than his ability to dress in an effective matter.