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The two charts illustrate the percentage changes of
households
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owning the 3 home appliances (washing machine, refrigerator, vacuum cleaner) and the number of weekly
hours
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per household spent doing housework in one country from 1920 to 2019. All the 3 categories spread over the domestic
households
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there during the given years. The most dramatic change occurred in refrigerator ownership from 0% of the
households
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in 1920 to 100% of those in 1980. Following
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vacuum cleaners steadily increased between 1920 and 2000, with 30% and 100% respectively.
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, washing machines were owned the most of the three in 1920, increased slightly until 1960, and fluctuated with a narrow range reaching the bottom of the three.
Households
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succeed in reducing the number of
hours
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of housework per week between 1920 to 2019. Until 1960, the figure decreased rapidly from 50
hours
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in 1920 to 20
hours
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in 1960, after which the downwards trend showed down. Overall, from 1920 to 1960, the proportion of
households
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owning the house appliances surged, and the number of
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of housework per week decreased dramatically before the range of both the change unveiled smaller after 1980.
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