Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people' salaries to pay for public services such as roads and schools. Other thinks high taxes are bad. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many

people

hold the view that a major portion of

people

's earning should be taken for community services like schools and roads ,

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some

people

assume that as a bad idea. I will argue both points and present my opinion. On the one hand, individuals who agree with a high ratio of taxes, care about life welfare for their child and themselves, which mean they like to live in a perfect society.

For instance

, parents would like their children educated in a school of high quality, and

also

they want to drive on the roads with good condition to have easy commit.

Hence

, some consent that the state enforces a high

amount

of taxes.

On the other hand

, some believe that high taxes in an awful idea. They do not want to give a major

amount

of their earnings to the government. These

people

think that the public facility has to

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by big public factories or companies which have broad income annually. To illustrate, the oil and gas factory earn significant outcomes by selling these products to foreign some of

this

amount

could use for public facility providers. To conclude,

although

some agree that the salary has taken for the public facility by the government as a tax is

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, different opinion has thought by others. Though in my view giving an extensive

amount

of the income to government is accurate, that payment is for our life and our children's life's welfare, to live in well situation and society.