Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Write an essay expressing your point of view. Give reasons for your answers and provide relevant example and experience you might have.

Nowadays our population is getting bigger and new parents have their own ways of taking care of their

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. Because of that, many of us arguing in overall who do a better job raising our

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the

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or

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. In

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will express my opinion regarding

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issue.

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, I believe that all parents want the best for their

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it only depends on the level of society where they belong. On the

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hand, the major factor is who is the breadwinner of the family. In our current ,

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the

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is usually the one who

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to work and the

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is left with the child. In

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case, many people are siding in the idea that the queen is better than the king in the parenting aspect. Since, a

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is in charge of the house they have

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to spend with their

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every day so that, they have all the chance to imply and teach their

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.

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, in my country ,culture the male will hurt his pride when the woman goes out and work for their family. I will make myself as an example, both of my parents have a job but they need to decide which one should take care of me and it come out that my

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should be the one who needs to quit her job. So that

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learn almost everything from my mom.

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, as we getting older we slowly understand that the

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sacrifice on getting his feet off the work will make us think that they are

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good at parenting. Even thou, they don't have much

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as our

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spending with a child the

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and effort will count as a good parent Overall, both

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and

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is good at parenting is just they have a different role in order to give the best for their

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