Some people think that females shouldn’t allow in the military force whereas some think that they should give them chance. So what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some individuals opine that

women

ought not to have a role in the army

force

, whereas others believe differently that females are supposed to be in the military

force

. From my perspective, I oppose

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the

first

statement,

therefore

the reasons will be illustrated in the following paragraph.

To begin

with,

women

in

this

century are superior in many aspects. They are more than capable in a variety of fields,

such

as sports, cooking, education, and even

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military service. As the world has opened to accept

women

’s abilities,

the

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job opportunities should be equalized too.

For instance

, during the World War era, no females could encounter

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the

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men’s

matter

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.

However

, in the war field between the Nazi and Russian’s red army,

women

were willing to give their lives to their motherland and fighting till their

last

breath. Despite the short-term training and knowing they would eventually die, they fought with no fears just as men. For

this

matter, we should appreciate how brave the

women

were.

Secondly

, there are tons of jobs

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women

can be a part of despite being

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real army. In terms of technologies, it is crucial that the military

force

must have advanced skilled workers who will protect the

force

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first

hand.

For example

, in

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WWII, the allies had the most up to date weapons against the axis which brought victory to them in the end. As

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showed in some documentaries, in the post-war years,

women

were the remained human resources in each country because of that the public started to recognized the capabilities of females’

intellectual

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.

Consequently

,

women

should be praised and offered the exact opportunities as men. To conclude, everyone despites

genders

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gender

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,

races

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, age should be giving the same treatment in all aspects, even in the military

force

, females are intelligent, thoughtful, and capable enough to involve in their nation’s

force

.