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COMPLETING UNIVERSITY EDUCATION IS THOUGHT BY SOME TO BE THE BEST WAY TO GE A GOOD JOB. ON THE OTHER HAND, OTHER PEOPLE THINK THAT GETTING EXPERIENCE AND DEVELOPING SOFT SKILLS IS MORE IMPORTANT. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION.

#university #education #ge #job #hand #people #skills
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 belief that practical experiences and soft skills are two ways lead people to their
archievements
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achievements
achievement
.
However
, there is
more
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 persuasive opinion that graduating
university
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education
 is
much
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 more reliable approach to have a successful career. Discussing two contrary ideas would give a
fully
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 understanding. On one side of the argument, it is true that realistic experiences and soft skills play a vital role whenever an occupation topic is mentioned. Candidates often show their
recruiment
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recruitment
 as much project
involvelment
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involvement
 including their previous experience and problem-solving abilities.
However
,
candidate
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 must have strong backgrounds
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 their field.
Those knowledge
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 could be learned from life, which take a long period to
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 sustainable or through high
education
.
For instance
, initiating a start-up project at the early stage of the career
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 various implicit risk. Non-participated
university
 owners would have been failed soon when the projects start.
On the other hand
,
university
education
 would provide strong backgrounds and comprehensive aspects
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 their field. Students
also
 learn from the previous projects, how could they survived, or their common mistakes.
Moreover
, universities do have subjects related to soft skill development, so students would have well-adjusted intuition before they graduated and
succed
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succeed
 in their later
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lives
life
lifes
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. According to recent research, there are just 10% of American
billionares
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billionaires
 were not graduated
of
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or
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 participated
on
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 any universities.
Besides
, most of them
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 related to some prominent universities. It
indicate
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 that high
education
 is
substaintial
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substantial
. To sum up, it is undeniable that getting experience and soft skills are ways to obtain success.
Nevertheless
,
university
education
show
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 a reliable career path
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start
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 from
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basic knowledge and reputation.
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