Some organisations belive that their employees should dress smartly . Others value quality of work above appearance . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion .

At the present day, There are numerous types of

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and have obviously a large number of private

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more than in the past which is created environmental issues and severe disease for

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such

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as air pollution, global warming and respiratory disease.

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essay will discuss

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problem and find possible solutions to solve

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problem. the plethora of

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increase

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significantly.

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is because

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private

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make more convenient and

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save time to travel than other vehicles.

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the financial value of the

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is highly cost to spen, the plenty private

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is

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choosen

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chosen

available by citizens.

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, the effects from using private

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have many issues because it is beginning of toxic pollution in the air which

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created smoke from exhaust and

construct

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citizens have respiratory diseases.

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, when the

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were broken down to become trash. it is damaged in the environmental disasters from destroying the rubbish from the

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problems have many ways to fix. The effective

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which government should

adjusteis

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adjusters

isto control the

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of

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on the roads.

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, making projects which are encouraged the use of public transportations

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of private

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and have more alternative transportations and developing the transportations that help

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to have satisfaction in the public vehicles in the countries

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, The government must promote

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to gain knowledge about the negative from private

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. In conclusion, More than the private

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in the towns are negative issues for the environment and suffer to the

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which occur to create unexpected effects

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as lethal illness.

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, The government should control the number of

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in efficacy methods.