Some organisations belive that their employees should dress smartly . Others value quality of work above appearance . Discuss both these views and give your own opinion .

At the present day, There are numerous types of

cars

and have obviously a large number of private

cars

more than in the past which is created environmental issues and severe disease for

people

such

as air pollution, global warming and respiratory disease.

this

essay will discuss

this

problem and find possible solutions to solve

this

problem. the plethora of

cars

increase

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significantly.

This

is because

the

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private

cars

make more convenient and

also

save time to travel than other vehicles.

Although

the financial value of the

cars

is highly cost to spen, the plenty private

cars

is

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choosen

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chosen

available by citizens.

As a result

, the effects from using private

cars

have many issues because it is beginning of toxic pollution in the air which

are

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created smoke from exhaust and

construct

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citizens have respiratory diseases.

Furthermore

, when the

cars

were broken down to become trash. it is damaged in the environmental disasters from destroying the rubbish from the

cars

This

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problems have many ways to fix. The effective

methods

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which government should

adjusteis

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adjusters

isto control the

amount

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of

cars

on the roads.

For instance

, making projects which are encouraged the use of public transportations

instead

of private

cars

and have more alternative transportations and developing the transportations that help

people

to have satisfaction in the public vehicles in the countries

Furthermore

, The government must promote

people

to gain knowledge about the negative from private

cars

. In conclusion, More than the private

cars

in the towns are negative issues for the environment and suffer to the

people

which occur to create unexpected effects

such

as lethal illness.

However

, The government should control the number of

cars

in efficacy methods.