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Some people think that it would be better for large companies and industry to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

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Introduction
Certain groups of
people
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 state that worldwide companies win from relocating in zones nearby large urban
centers
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. Even though changing the location of industries may wind up with some troubles for the local environment, there are some benefits as well. In the following paragraphs, we will dive into
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 disadvantages and advantages of it as well as summarize all statements.
Body paragraph 1
Needless to say that relocation in rural areas can boost its infrastructure and provide a considerable amount of
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 with
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.
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, we ought to admit that the presence of big companies and factories in the area easily attracts the attention of investors and new workforce.
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 way, the ranges can count on
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 of fields as it may cover
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 spheres as amusement, tourism, medicine and later on. Another benefit is the increase of workplaces for locals. The thing is that heads of industries cannot afford
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 workers from their previous place as it creates far more complications than hiring locals. Overall, pros
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 are promising scenery.
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, there are some relevant drawbacks concerning pollution and side effects of granting jobs to rural
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. It is a general fact that most contaminated areas stem from acts of industry and big companies.
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, in these
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 regional ranges are in danger of being exacerbated by pollution that results in
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 of local flora and fauna as well as contamination of natural water sources. What’s more, the side effect of giving workplaces to other individuals is an outbreak of joblessness in urban zones as moved industries are not able to offer
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 there. The outcome is
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a shortage
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 of vacancies in terms of company movements. Generally,
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work
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 offers and developed infrastructure are inviting conditions,
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 hazards for the environment and difficulties for city
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Conclusion
In summary, these measures truly have advantages
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 lots and development in rural zones,
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, potential disadvantages including pollution and lack of
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 in urban cities cannot justify it. I reckon that, after all, disadvantages outweigh advantages.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic Development
  • Job Opportunities
  • Local Spending
  • Infrastructure Development
  • Urban Congestion
  • Traffic Congestion
  • Pollution Levels
  • Overpopulation
  • Operational Costs
  • Quality of Life
  • Living Conditions
  • Commuting
  • Community Development
  • Healthcare
  • Education
  • Social Services
  • Environmental Impact
  • Innovation Hubs
  • Collaborations
  • Profitability
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