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Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amounts of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brought up by wealthy parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

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ome
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some
 people argue that when dealing with the problems of adult life,
children
 raised in families without large amounts of money are better prepared than those raised by wealthy parents. In
this
 essay, the argument can be on a sort of conventional fallacy to people with poor childhood for a few actual reasons which are as follows. Coming across
economic
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 hardship of adult life, a person brought up in
poor
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a poor
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 family can handle their circumstances inactively under a short-sighted view enduring a lack of necessities as if they’d done for their childhood. Despite the fact that they are a bit better at it than their
counterpartners
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counter partners
 in a short term, it will be unlikely for them to escape there and become wealthy
finally
 because of insufficient intelligence and experience on how to earn a large amount of money.
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, compared to a child who lives with rich parents running a huge company and investing in advanced technology and is often and familiarly exposed to the specialised information and business relationship, the poor child should make a
desicion
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decision
 on dividing a bread into some parts sharing with siblings. Regretfully, the differences between the two
children
 will have
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 with when dealing with their difficulties in their adulthood.
The poor
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children
 tend to have low self-esteem which is formed completely in childhood and influences on
problem solving
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 ability of their adult life. Their parents are so busy making income for
living
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 that they rarely build a good relationship with their
children
, which leads to little confidence or
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toward
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 themselves. A number of depression
casses
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cases
causes
classes
 of adults are originated in their unfortunate
childhoold
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childhood
 and most the patients frequently fail to overcome their
trasic
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tragic
 situations, as Freud had referred to
this
 point in his psychology thesis. Sadly, it is
prevelant
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prevalent
 in slum communities over the world. To sum up,
children
 from
low income
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family
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families
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 can hardly prepare better for the future when facing adulthood problems
such
 as a shortage of
earning
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earnings
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 as well as mental suffering.
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