A friend from a different country emailed you and asked about your typical day. Write an email in reply to your friend. Use the notes to help you

How have you been? I am writing to reply about my typical day I usually wake up at 7 : 50 o clock in the
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study
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I study from S o dock to 10:35 am my mother ten preprises Good for me , so I am free in the afternoon . Shen Hapa nap until 2
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