Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Many people support the idea that people should

work

for

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same

office

until getting

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retirement

. Meanwhile, others change the

job

more than twice. From my point of view,

i

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prefer to

work

my

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in various workplaces for getting new challenges, even though, living in the same organisation is comfortable and safe. It is apparent that working in the same

office

is constantly

comfort

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a comfort

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zone. because of doing

a

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the

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same

job

for many years,

this

will make

you

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your

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work

professionally and accurately than workers who just start the

job

. In that case, jobbers who

work

in the same

office

often turn to seniors or higher levels which mean increasing salary rate or having more holiday periods.

Moreover

, they will get good credits of being royalty in the organisation by working for

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a long

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time. Due to the reason above, there are many opinions support the idea of working

same

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in same

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office

is better than changing the

job

frequently.

On the other hand

, Many new jobbers

also

me

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think that it is better to change the workplace for expanding

work

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their work

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abilities and connections. It is clear that the more

diffrent

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different

jobs you get, the

variaty

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variety

skills

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of skills

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you have.

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example

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learning new

challengs

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challenges

challenge

from different

office

enviroments

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environments

environment

. In

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addition

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addiction

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addition

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, working in various organisations makes you get more connections. In fact, your works will be more impact by having expert friends from

diffrent

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different

workplaces. From these benefits to upgrade skills and find a connection widely, many new generation jobbers prefer to find a new

job

after they worked in the

office

around one year or less. In conclusion, both opinions on

this

topic is a personal question depending on each career paths. Both of them have benefits and drawbacks. It seems to me that getting

variaty

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variety

experience from

diffrent

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different

organisations is better than working in the same place in term of skills and connections.