Some people think that managers alone should make decisions in the company, while others think that employees should be involved in the decision-making process too. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is often argued that all problems in the
company
should be solved by leaders of it, others
instead
say that usual workers participation is significant.
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essay agrees that
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future plans and actions need to be made by bosses. Employees are the main working source of the
company
and,
therefore
they understand
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internal problems and solve them effectively. They have an opportunity to increase profit from the sails by improving
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process, which leads to more efficient production of the product.
Moreover
, they know how to decrease unnecessary expenditures, due to their experience in the working process. A lot of small businesses (like my fathers’) are asking their workers and have great profit by not wasting money and analyzing the market.
However
, in large companies managers have years and years of experience and education in MBA universities.
This
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decisions that
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to growth of the sales.
Furthermore
, it is extremely hard to plan anything, when
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number of people suggests their ideas. Brainstorming leads to mess in heads and
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of
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concentration on the most significant parts of the planning.
For example
, all successful
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in Silicon Valley like Google, Apple, Facebook have thousands and thousands of employees that programming services for customers, but there are only
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main managers (Marc Zuckerberg, Tim Cook), who make important decisions. In conclusion, workers mainly can solve
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problems of the
company
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profit for the
company
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prioritized task.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • top-down approach
  • hierarchical structure
  • grassroots level
  • strategic planning
  • on-the-ground experience
  • inclusive management
  • employee engagement
  • democratic process
  • transparency
  • cohesion
  • morale
  • practical insights
  • long-term goals
  • mutual respect
  • resistance to change
  • team dynamics
  • broader perspective
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