The graphs below provide the information on global population figures and figures of urban population in different world religion
The graphs elucidate the information about world
population
growth from 1800 to 2100 and opulence
of developed and developingCorrect article usage
the opulence
religion
during 2015-2040.Fix the agreement mistake
religions
Overall
, it can be inferred that the highest populace shall be noticed by the year
2040 and the count of people
living in developed areas shall remain similar in all the years of 2015 while
continuous increase shall be witnesses
in the case of developing areas.
It is evident from the line graph that in 1800, the total public was equal to 1000 Wrong verb form
witnessed
million
people
. The figure increases gradually till 1960 with which it becomes exactly thrice of the initial year
. After that, from the year
1960 to 2020, no doubt, there was an upsurge but it was a shrift incline that made the population
of the world , approximately 7500 million
people
with inclining
trend the count of Correct article usage
an inclining
people
shall be the maximum that is
roughly 8000 million
. However
, there shall be a decrement in the world population
in next
given years to almost 600 Correct article usage
the next
million
people
.
Turning to words with bar
graph , Correct article usage
a bar
developed
religion Correct article usage
the developed
population
was about 1200 million
in 2015, which shall remain same
after two decades.Correct article usage
the same
However
, developing areas followed an increasing trend in the given time period, in 2015 near
2200 Change the word
nearly
million
people
were living in developing regions , which was
increased by 200 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
in 2020. From the year
2025 to 2040, the population
in
developing a religion shall be inclined with 1800 Change preposition
apply
million
and touch the peak point ( about 4000 million
) in 2040.Submitted by kaursharn01313 on
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