The graphs below provide the information on global population figures and figures of urban population in different world religion
The graphs elucidate the information about world
population
growth from 1800 to 2100 and Use synonyms
opulence
of developed and developingCorrect article usage
the opulence
religion
during 2015-2040.Fix the agreement mistake
religions
Overall
, it can be inferred that the highest populace shall be noticed by the Linking Words
year
2040 and the count of Use synonyms
people
living in developed areas shall remain similar in all the years of 2015 Use synonyms
while
continuous increase shall be Linking Words
witnesses
in the case of developing areas.
It is evident from the line graph that in 1800, the total public was equal to 1000 Wrong verb form
witnessed
million
Use synonyms
people
. The figure increases gradually till 1960 with which it becomes exactly thrice of the initial Use synonyms
year
. After that, from the Use synonyms
year
1960 to 2020, no doubt, there was an upsurge but it was a shrift incline that made the Use synonyms
population
of the world , approximately 7500 Use synonyms
million
Use synonyms
people
with Use synonyms
inclining
trend the count of Correct article usage
an inclining
people
shall be the maximum Use synonyms
that is
roughly 8000 Linking Words
million
. Use synonyms
However
, there shall be a decrement in the world Linking Words
population
in Use synonyms
Linking Words
next
given years to almost 600 Correct article usage
the next
million
Use synonyms
people
.
Turning to words with Use synonyms
bar
graph , Correct article usage
a bar
developed
religion Correct article usage
the developed
population
was about 1200 Use synonyms
million
in 2015, which shall remain Use synonyms
same
after two decades.Correct article usage
the same
However
, developing areas followed an increasing trend in the given time period, in 2015 Linking Words
near
2200 Change the word
nearly
million
Use synonyms
people
were living in developing regions , which Use synonyms
was
increased by 200 Unnecessary verb
apply
million
in 2020. From the Use synonyms
year
2025 to 2040, the Use synonyms
population
Use synonyms
in
developing a religion shall be inclined with 1800 Change preposition
apply
million
and touch the peak point ( about 4000 Use synonyms
million
) in 2040.Use synonyms
Submitted by kaursharn01313 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
▼
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
▼
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words population, year, people, million with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "remain" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
▼