As a global trade increase Many goods including those we use on a daily basis are producing in another country and have to be transported long distances. Do benefits of this trend outweigh disadvantages.

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Nowadays, lots of products
such
Linking Words
as the
goods
Use synonyms
that use every day are being manufactured and shipped from overseas nations.
Although
Linking Words
this
Linking Words
trend brings some advantages, I feel that its negatives are far more. The major benefit is that merchandise is going to be produced more efficiently. Generally, it can be seen that every provincial's environment and availability of natural materials affect the production of
goods
Use synonyms
. Every nation has the ambience and natural sources which is suitable for some kind of products but not for others. So, it would be better if the nation produces commodities according to that and after that transport them to other units. Take California
for example
Linking Words
, which is
also
Linking Words
known as a Silicon Valley since there is
such
Linking Words
a gigantic amount of silicone which is the key component of computer chips and because of that only there these chips are being made than that of any country. Rising in the expense of these
goods
Use synonyms
is the paramount drawback of
this
Linking Words
trend. It is quite common that if
this
Linking Words
commodity would manufacture in other countries
then
Linking Words
the price of them may increase as in order to fulfil the demand of other nations they have to increase their infrastructure, have more employees, and
also
Linking Words
includes the  transportation tax. For ,these all the things they are having to invest a lot of money and they will recover that money from their customers by raising the price of their
goods
Use synonyms
.
Also
Linking Words
because of
this
Linking Words
trend the economy of that rustic, which imports stock, going to have less economic growth than that agrarian. There is a law  and according to that by exporting merchandise union have better economic growth because by that they receive money from other tribe and opposite thing happen by importing.
Consequently
Linking Words
, by
this
Linking Words
countries will lose their economy. To conclude, despite having some merits like enhancement in product's quality, I believe that its demerits are a lot more as it affects the price of daily products and economy of the country.
Submitted by jashan6334 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: