Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?

The line graph illustrates the time consumption by the British
people
of three divided phone calls during 1995 to 2002. Overall, the chart despites, three main telephone categories,
such
as domestic fixed-line, national and international calls and the mobiles. According to the given ,details the majority of
people
use by local fixed telephone and the less amount of residences were used handphones from 1995 to 2002.
First
of all, in 1995 local calls was accounted for approximately 72
minutes
. From 1996 and ,1999 many
people
have been used by domestic lines. It was increased over the time period and
finally
reached the peak amount and it was almost 90
minutes
.
However
, between 2000 and 2002 it was declined by approximately 18
minutes
.
Moreover
, mobile phones have been significantly growing
over
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time period. In 1999 it was about 12 and in 2008 it was reached around 43
minutes
.
Finally
, local and international calls have been dramatically increased. In 1995 about 34 and from 2002 accounted for about 62
minutes
in billions. To sum up, the majority of UK
people
used by local fixed-line compared with other two categories.
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