You recently noticed a local restaurant that was offering a part-time job. Write a letter to the restaurant’s manager. In your letter, – explain that you would like to apply for the job – give some details of any relevant experience that you have – specify the days and times that would suit you

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to show my interest in the job at your restaurant. The advertisement that I saw outside the restaurant stated that it is a part-time job of a kitchen & customer-service Manager;

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, I am interested to apply for the same. Let me give you a brief on my previous work experience.

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, I would like to mention

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that I am a 3rd-year student in hotel management.

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previous experience of working with a well-known hotel, and there I enhanced my skill in efficient Kitchen management which facilitates the process of serving customers rapidly by maintaining the quality of food.

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, I would be an asset in terms of improving customer service.

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,during my ,internship I had exposure to working with the international beverages department and I certainly could contribute to that segment at the restaurant. As I am still a student;

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, I am available only on weekends from 10 AM-5 PM and on weekdays between 5PM-10 PM I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Shreya

abhinaba.deSat Sep 11 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

180 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Part-time job
Hospitality industry
Culinary courses
Customer service skills
Operational hours
Flexibility
Communication skills
Team spirit
Reputation
Cuisine
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