Not enough students around the world choose to study science subjects at university. What are the reasons for this? What impact does this issue have on society

Education plays a vital role in humans life. Because
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it is needed to be educated in the competitive globe to get respect from the society.
However
, nowadays, people are not opting
science related
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subjects
to
study
.
This
essay will
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the reasons and impacts of
above-mentioned
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the above-mentioned
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issues in detail in the following paragraphs.
To begin
with, the present-day generation is too optimistic towards arts and
business related
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subjects
.
This
is because of high paid and reputed job opportunities.
Besides
this
, the professions like lectures, engineers, accountants and lawyers and all receive good esteem from the community.
In addition
, the noticeable one is, in a particular culture in India girls are not allowed to
study
a science degree due to some moral values. To summarize, job opportunities, good pay and consideration are the main reasons for choosing other
subjects
rather than science.
On the contrary
, the above-mentioned problem has
worst
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demerits. Like, shortage of nurses, doctors and even IT professionals worldwide.
For example
, during
this
pandemic
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all the countries are in demand of
staffs
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staff
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to work in the hospitals.To exemplify, a recent
study
report from World Health Organization proved that, one nurse is caring
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to four patients in
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Care Unit due to staff shortfall which is actually unethical.
As a result
of
this
,
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the patient
a patient
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patient
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patients
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may fail to receive
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quality care. To summarize, the
impacts
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impact
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of
above-mentioned
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matter is
deficit
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the deficit
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number of health care providers
in
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globally.
Finally
, students should give
importants
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importance
to all
subjects
to
study
. Because
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the world needs all
professional
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professionals
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.
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