Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement? What other measures do you think might be effective?

One of the heated issues is growing the cost of car oil is the best direction to solve the problems of increasing

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and

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pollution. From my perspective, I strongly believe that accumulate the price of gasoline is more advantages than stable cost. It is often argued that expanding the rates of petrol is might be the worst for some people who are unable to pay for expensive gas.

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other ways which could help in terms of

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contamination and

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. To illustrate, using bicycles or using republic transportation

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of using a car.

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, a reason that I do agree with is the

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will be fresh and it is good for individual health.

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, on the one hand, some people like to used

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because it is more comfortable than using

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bicycles. On the other hands, some citizen like to used the republic transportation more than the personal

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because there are many methods

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effective to fix the points of pollution and

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jam

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.

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, the government should contribute the advantages of using less

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personal

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.

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,

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to help a country because nowadays there is a lot of

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. In conclusion, there

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some

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that the youth should understand about the riddles of using too

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cars

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the

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and dirty

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in a country. From my point of view, step up the price of car oil is the best way to Amed these points.