There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter

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Dear Manager, I myself Dinesh

Borase

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Borse

, resident of the Greater Geelong, and regular user of your bus service for daily commute to the job. I am writing

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letter to you to bring irregularity of the bus punctuality in my area especially from the

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couple of weeks. Since the issue has been growing over the

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two weeks me and my co-travellers are finding it very difficult to manage to reach the destination on time.

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to that, it is

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degrading my reputation among my colleagues and junior staff. I am hoping that to resolve

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issue, the company can introduce more buses in our area as well as finding a way to keep track of bus journey. I am looking forward to seeing some development regarding

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issue in the coming days. I would like to thank you in advance for your efforts to resolve

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situation from me and my co-travellers. Yours faithfully, Dinesh

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Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

159 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

adhering to schedules
inconvenience
daily routine
punctuality
frequency during peak hours
overcrowding
commuters
update system
reliable
maintenance
breakdowns
irregular bus timings
passengers
delays
unreliable
appointments

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people think that genetically modified (GM) crops are a positive development. Others, however, argue that they are potentially dangerous. Discuss both these views andgive your own opinion.

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At present, the media affects people’s lives significantly. What impact thus this have on society? Is it a negative or positive development?

Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting culture. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.