Some people think it's better to choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 250 words.

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It has been argued that an individual shall make
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whose thought process matches that of an individual. There are
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both
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in favour and against regarding
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viewpoint, which
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discussed in the following paragraphs To commence with, making a
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who
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same
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the same
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opinions lead the
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to have a fruitful discussion at all
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times. As the other
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will agree to the viewpoint of a
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, they
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will have a common topic to discuss, which will lead to fruitful decisions.
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to that,
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the persons can spend their
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together more frequently, leading to a productive discussion.
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, as there will be no conflicts of interest, it will help them to reach out to a conclusion seamlessly because they will not waste their priceless
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in
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. To exemplify,
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a student
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student
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students
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studying commerce will prefer
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a friend
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friend
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friends
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who
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background, as they can discuss various issues related to finance in their leisure
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.
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, there are
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that people should make friends who sometimes disagree with them.
This
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is so because it helps in improvement in
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the individuals, as they will always criticise each other's thoughts,
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will broaden their viewpoint which will
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lead to a fruitful conclusion. It
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helps in broadening the mindset of an individual.
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person
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a person
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having
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a difference
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difference
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differences
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in viewpoints will always try to figure out an argument, leading to conflicts and wastage of
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quite often.
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,
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time
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can be used at some other place where it can bear results.
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, whenever a decision is to be made on a macro level, authorities
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a meeting to hear different viewpoints and resolve them, so that correct decision can be implemented. To conclude, there are
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in favour of
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the thoughts, but personally, I feel that an individual should prefer a
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as a
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who
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same
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the same
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opinions
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because the
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can give correct advice according to the situation and they can spend
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together discussing things which can act as a stress buster to
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of them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • bond
  • support
  • unconditional love
  • shared values
  • mutual understanding
  • trust
  • emotional well-being
  • interdependence
  • societal norms
  • companionship
  • loyalty
  • advice
  • experiences
  • mentorship
  • trustworthy
  • reliable
  • reliable
  • cherish
  • strengthen
  • deepen
  • attach importance to
  • prioritize
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