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Nowadays, more and more older people who need employment compete with the younger people for the same jobs. What problems this causes? What are solutions?

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These days, many older
people
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 are competing with
youths
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 in
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job
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the job
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market
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 for the same position. To enter into an experienced club, one has to start from
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entry-level
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entry
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an entry
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level
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 but when older
people
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 participate for
entry
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entry-level
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level
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 as
youths
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, it creates
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a problem
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problem
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problems
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 for
younger
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the younger
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generation
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 which we will discuss in
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 essay with solutions. Unemployment
problems
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 among
youths
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 are persisting in
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job
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the job
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market
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 due to
participation
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the participation
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 of
older
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the older
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generation
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. High
level
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 of competition at
entry
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entry-level
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level
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 jobs, in which old
people
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 are outperforming young
generation
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 because employers tend to hire more experienced
work force
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workforce
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,
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 led to high employment among
youths
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. Other
problems
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 are, graduate
student
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students
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 when entering
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job
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the job
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market
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 are not prepared and lack basic
skills
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 like interpersonal
skills
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 and customer
relationship
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relationships
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. In
current
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the current
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 scenario employers are seeking trained professionals, here too older
people
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 have an advantage as they have prior experience,
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which makes
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 them more employable and efficient.
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, due to unemployment, creates a depressing situation for
youths
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 which could misguide
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the young
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generation
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 to earn living by theft, robbery and many more.
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, older generations lack enthusiasm and energy and
less
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are less
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 productive due to old age
problems
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 as their deteriorating health which could
let
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lead
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 to
serious
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a serious
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problem
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problems
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 at
work place
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workplace
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. These
problems
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 can be dealt with suffice steps. Introducing pension scheme for
retired
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a retired
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 person, which will help them meet the day to day needs and forbid them to look for employment in
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job
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the job
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market
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 and
this
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 will make an open space for
younger
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the younger
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generation
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job
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the job
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market
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.
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, universities and colleges should introspect their techniques for grooming a student and making him ready for
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job
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the job
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market
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. Having a partnership with companies, universities can bring more pragmatic and
industry relevant
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industry-relevant
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 programs which could inculcate students into a skilled workforce.
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,
youths
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 are energetic and full of spirit they just need
right
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the right
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 motivation and
skills
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 to outperform at
workplace
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the workplace
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.
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Job
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The job
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market
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 is open for every age, some companies require prior experience and some just want basic
skills
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. With older
generation
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 looking for same jobs as
youths
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 have certain issues, it can be resolved with mentioned solutions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Intergenerational competition
  • Age discrimination
  • Adaptability
  • Hiring practices
  • Workforce diversity
  • Upskilling
  • Lifelong learning
  • Flexible working arrangements
  • Ageism
  • Technological proficiency
  • Productivity concerns
  • Diverse skillsets
  • Legislative protection
  • Employment equity
  • Biases
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