Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countris such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important intenacional language? Give reasons for your answer.

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thousands
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of people prefer to go to
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Australia
Austria
, United Kingdom and America for
further
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that they can get easily good quality of education
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can earn
money
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also
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language is
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language to learn easily for pupils.
To begin
with, education is better in
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students
can easily understand what tutors teach them.
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, they can enhance their skills in their
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interested
subjects. As per the research, 45%of
students
always consider
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speaking countries for
further
study.
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,
students
can earn
money
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along with
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. Because
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nations provides
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job to
students
.
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, they can
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easily
really
make
money
by themselves.
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,
English
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common
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language across the globe. As
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students
can get
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anywhere overall the world when complete the graduation.
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will lead to
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increasing
demand to get
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well paid
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across the world. As per the newspaper report, 40
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of employers are
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good
money
after they have finished their graduation in
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, I think that
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students
can get better education
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can make
money
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nations. People get
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aware
awards
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easily at profession so they can start up business anywhere.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • multicultural
  • linguistic proficiency
  • academic institutions
  • vocational opportunities
  • lingua franca
  • pedagogical quality
  • cosmopolitan
  • global workforce
  • cross-border communication
  • mobility
  • cultural literacy
  • standardization
  • immersive learning
  • networking
  • diversity
  • integration
  • expatriates
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