In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Transportation is an essential means to convey people and goods from one place to another. Certain individuals in different nations state it is vital to use substantial capital for the construction of

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station for extremely movable trains in urban areas while others suggest the money should be utilised on working on public transport that

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already in place. There are valid opinions on both sides which will

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in the essay below. At the forefront, those who believe that

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sum of money should be earmark to build

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lines point out

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significance. The increase in migration of people from rural areas to the cities

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lead to

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over population

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leading to high demand

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transportation.

In addition

, building more

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routes in city centres would

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ease traffic congestion on the

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and emission of fossil gases in the atmosphere which would lead to global warming.

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quite certain for those plying on the

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because it would be difficult for hoodlums to attack the passengers while the train is

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, due to cases of kidnapping and robbery attacks recorded on

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users using private or public vehicles.

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prefers to travel using

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In contrast

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of persons opine that

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an amount of money should be spent on improving the already existing mass transit. If there is

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network, transportation of several

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of goods from one locality to another would

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be made easier and faster.

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, it would aid to generate revenue for the government as

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tourist

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from different countries would travel to explore the states by utilising

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public transport.

Lastly

, it would

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decrease accidents and

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of damaged cars on the

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due to potholes and bad

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of the

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For instance

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by Federal

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Safety Commission,

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that 50% of accident cases would be reduced if current public transport is improved. Conclusively, in my opinion,

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lines should be constructed in metropolitan cities because of safety reasons, reduction in traffic jams and it is faster.