Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam' how true do you think this statement is ? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?

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ownership

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risen significantly and the world is

encounted

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encounter

with mass

traffic

jam. In my opinion,

this

statement is strongly true

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many reasons that

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will explain in the following paragraphs.

Also

,

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government

govenment

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should find solutions solving

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ploblems

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problems

problem

. There are many reasons that drive people

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about having a personal

car

.

To begin

with, public transports in their country are not effective quality. Many

machanical

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mechanical

problems in trains and

bus

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emerge in the past years that make locals cannot manage their time spending on roads. In

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addiction

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, the unsafety of using public vehicles, many

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espacially

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especially

in

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argue that they would rather use

personal

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car

than using train or bus because of avoiding from

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assaulting

and sexual

harrassment

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harassment

from

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the driver

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driver

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or other passengers which occurs

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time in nowadays.

Moreover

, not only the cars or drivers

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but

also

the city plan.Some research

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that the unorganised urban roads and

accomodations

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accommodations

can cause the

traffic

jam more than the

well-manage

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urban system.

Thus

, it is obvious that all the reasons above make local

citizen

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prefer to own a personal

car

for giving more

covenience

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convenience

convenient

and safe even it may cause the huge

traffic

problem. To solve

this

problem as the authority part, there are several solutions that can help people choose public transport than their

car

.

First

, updating the public vehicles for engaging the locals

in particular

the new bus with hi-tech safety technology and the new train with higher speed.

Then

, collaboration with public

trasport

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transport

organisations

create

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a promotion to

local

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passenger. These solutions will make lower income

citizen

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such

as

first

jobbers and students try to use

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transportation and reduce

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number of personal

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cars

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car

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care

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on the roads.

Lastly

, trying to manage the city plan

such

as reducing

deadend

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dead end

and creating more possible ways to

commuter

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. In conclusion, it is undeniable that

rising

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number of

personal

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car

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can affect

to

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urban

traffic

jam

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so much. As the government duty, they need to create an action plan to solve

this

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these

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ploblems

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problems

problem

as soon as possible.