Large businesses have big budget for marketing and promotion and as a result, people gravitate towards buying their products. What problem does this cause? What can be done to encourage people to buy local products?

In
this
competitive world,
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extensive
scale
firms invest a colossal amount in the advertisement of their products to entice the customers to boost their sales. There are several issues
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with
this
scenario as in
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it tends to
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of native small
scale
entrepreneurs .
Therefore
, to mitigate the issue steps that need to be taken in
this
direction shall be explicated
further
. Certainly, with the modernization and trade
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it would be feasible for the business tycoons to expand their work throughout the globe.
As a result
of
this
,
the products
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the cost of the product
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cost
is ten times higher than its actual manufacturing
cost
, including inclusive taxes and endorsement
cost
along with profit margin.
Hence
, the goods are sold at greater prices
in contrast
to
native
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,
consequently
, leading to
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in
inflation
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rate. Another problem
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is, it
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up the small industries and undoubtedly, with their dissolution a lot of local skills vanishes.
For instance
, junk food chains destroy the local restaurants serving healthy and nutritious foods.
Thus
, the large
scale
businesses are accountable for price
hike
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and fizzle out small entrepreneurs.
On the other hand
, to motivate dwellers of a specific terrain awareness regarding the significance of utilization of native goods and its merits should be highlighted to aware the public by conducting awareness campaigns, seminars and talks. The advantages in context to economical conditions should be imparted to
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.
Likewise
, the procurement of local items eventually, generates employment opportunities for the residences along with money inflow. To illustrate,
initially
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Patanjali was a small
scale
firm, but with
the
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government support revenue in millions is generated today. In compendium, large businesses sell products at
higher
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a higher
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cost
is one of the vital
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and to motivate people, advantages of local goods should be explained.
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