Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be effective?
The major concerns which have been rising nowadays are
vehicles
congestion on the road and issues related to contamination.Even though increasing the cost of fuel is one of the remedies for these concerns, alternate solutions have to find to for preventing these more effectively. Use synonyms
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