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How AstraZeneca CEO corporate responsibility effect to the company

(5) Successful
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: - All businesses trade with the aspect of
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. Though, effective ones have efficient
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 systems in place to handle any procedures.
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, the effective
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 should be considered in AZ, as they are not the only one
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 offering non-profit vaccines during pandemic, and it has a competition with the Johnson & Johnson the US based firm. The vital
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 factor of competition of AZ, with J&J is that the J&J come with one jab. So, competitor underestimation and no
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 identification
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 violated by the AZ. (6) Inclusiveness, Participation and Corporate Citizenship: -
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 stage of corporate governance involves two key phases: a
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 working with community and eco-friendly responsibility as well as generating shareholders and workers from all experiences. So, the
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 should have to agree with business proposals with the goods intention considering social responsibility without thinking off to improvement of themselves. The
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 had agreeing to supply vaccines at the cost to gain
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 reputation and experience through vaccination field.
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 demonstrates the violation of social responsibility by the
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. Mr. Matt Hancock the health secretary, specified if the production based in America they won’t be agreed to supplies vaccines to NHS with protectionism led by the white-house.

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