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How can a nurse apply for job in the Uk in this modern times To what extent do you agree or disagree

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I am an experienced, dedicated and compassionate Registered Nurse with aligned experience in clinical nursing. I am young, energetic , proactive and proven ability to handle challenging task skillfully with critical thinking and independent judgement to deliver quality, safe and patient-centered
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. As an overseas nurse, I have successfully passed the NMC CBT Exam, all four modules of IELTS and have received NMC decision letter to sit for OSCE.
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, I will require a Tier 2 sponsorship to be able to work in the United Kingdom where I can bring about invaluable and remarkable contributions based on my
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 and experience. Due to the experiences I have gathered overtime, I am interested to work in the Imperial College Health
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 NHS Trust where I can replicate the clinical knowledge I have attained through education and practice. Having worked in the following specialist facilities: Casualty
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, Orthopedic
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, Obstetrics and Gynecology
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, Surgical
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, Medical
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, Pediatric
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, Special
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 baby
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, Dialysis
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, Intensive
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, Physiotherapy
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 and having experienced a surfeit of cases
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 as: Gunshot injury, head injury, fractures , Lumbar discopathy, Lumbar spondylosis, Labour, spontaneous vaginal deliveries, Antenatal and postnatal
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, burns, Appendicitis, hemorrhoids, Benign Prostrate hyperplasia, colostomy, Severe malaria, chronic kidney injury, heart failure, chronic kidney disease, dialysis , severe hypertension, diabetes, Neonatal sepsis, Jaundice, malnutrition, musculoskeletal disorders. I believe I am best fit for
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 position. In regards to the 6 C’s, I render holistic and personalized
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 to patients with compassion and courage in a competent way. I am
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 committed to impacting positivity with my effective problem solving
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. I possess good observational and record keeping
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 as well as a great desire to always learn new things which helps to ensure continuity of
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 and deal with challenging situations. I am fit physically and psychologically to attend to patients’ medical needs and well-being as well as their relatives with great passion. I am excellent at assisting individuals of all ages improve the quality of their lives. I am a computer literate and vast in I.T
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 which is needful due to the broadening and advancement in technology. My
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 include but not limited to the following: Good communication and interpersonal
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, good time manager, flexibility, Emotional stability, ability to handle difficult tasks, effective team member, willingness to learn, Empathy, Physical stamina, essential Leadership
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. I am certain that the above are just a subset of what I can offer as a professional to the trust and would be delighted if granted an Interview as I am willing and anticipate working with a high performing reputable Trust like yours who brings out the best from its staffs while adding value to patients. I look forward to having a positive feedback from you. Thanks.
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