Some people think that the main factors influencing a child's development these days are things such as television, friends, and music. Others believe that the family still remains more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Factors

playing

role

in

child

development

always remain a question of debate, some individuals are in favour of television,

friends

and

music

and on the other ,hand few are of opinion that family have more to do with

child

development

and I am going to view both sides of the issue but personally I am in favour of family's

role

is vital in children's growth.

First

let's consider the television,

friends

and

music

as a catalyst of

development

, so one can say yes these

factors

help a

child

learn things like rhymes and alphabets in a brilliant way,

music

give them pleasant and calming effects ,

friends

, of course, play a vital

role

in creating one's personality. But family plays the greatest

role

in a

child

mentoring as in early periods parents are deciding for kids how much time they are going to have television,

music

especially what kind of, and

friends

are

also

tailored by family. In short, they are creating a whole environment for fully positive or negative growth by adding or deleting above mentioned

factors

. Parents create examples by showing their own behaviour like praying every day in the morning, respect for the elderly ,law and order, keeping the place neat and clean, following food trends like vegan or non-vegetarian .For example one of my family

friends

kids is praying at an early age, chanting hymns and religious slogans every day. So,in the

,

Remove the comma

apply

show examples

end-all the above-discussed

factors

have their own

role

to play but in my personal thinking parents and family members are the sole governing force in a

child

's overall multidirectional and full-blown

development

.