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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place.What is your opinion about this?

#people #home #workplace #place
One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is
organization
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 of our environment. It is undeniable that a home and a workplace are an essential part of our life,
therefore
, some
people
 tell that these places should be tidy. In
this
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this
 tendency will be scrutinized and I will give my opinion regarding
this
 one. It is obvious that well organized our workplace or a lawn before a house are our face
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 because they introduce us.
As a result
,
people
 judge us for the
first
 vision. At the same time, the order of our environment shows other individuals there is
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order in our heads too and we
organized
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,
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 hard-working and punctual human beings. As far as I am concerned, a well-organized common employee is much better for an employer
to
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 a disorganized genius worker. A good example here is my colleague Svyatoslav
Dmitriv
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Dmitriev
. He is an extremely tidy person,
consequently
, his workshop
as well as his equipment which he repairs are very clean and everything
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 works without any problems. Undoubtedly, he became
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 leader of our team. Owing to
this
 quality, our plant is the best in our company in comparison with other ones.
On the other hand
, there are
people
 who demonstrate another behaviour and attitude to tidy to their surroundings. They prefer living in chaos. There is
disorder
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 in their houses and their lives. Taking an example
my
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 schoolmate Maxim Zakhryapa. He is the best example for understanding
ofa
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 wrong lifestyle. Looking at his behaviour, home or workplace, everybody understands that disorder directs us
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incorrect
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 direction and our future is incomprehensible, the main reason is Maxim did not archive anything in his life. Taking everything mentioned into account, in our final
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 we can say that tidy is the main aspect of life. In my opinion, well-organized
people
 are doomed to success.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • organised
  • clutter-free
  • productivity
  • mental clarity
  • efficiency
  • professionalism
  • first impressions
  • ergonomics
  • aesthetically pleasing
  • compulsive neatness
  • functional space
  • minimising distractions
  • systematic arrangement
  • time management
  • work-life balance
  • streamline
  • feng shui
  • optimal performance
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