Some people argue that the government should give every unemployed person a mobile phone and should make sure they have access to the Internet. They believe this is the best way of using public money to reduce the problem of unemployment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some

people

suggest that giving every jobless person a smartphone and making sure they have

access

to the

Internet

is the best

way

of utilizing public

money

, hoping to reduce the

unemployment

issue

. In my opinion, giving jobless

people

mobile

phone

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and

access

to The

Internet

isn’t the proper

way

to tackle the problem of

unemployment

. Given that the unemployed receive smartphones and

access

to the

Internet

, the

issue

of

unemployment

still remains. Handing phones and

internet

access

to the jobless isn't going to encourage

people

to find

jobs

. What the government should consider doing is creating new

jobs

or open campaigns which teach jobless

people

new skills they haven’t acquired yet.

For example

, the Thai government started a campaign in which successful marketing companies come and teach the unemployed salesmanship skills for free. The campaign inspired many jobless

people

to start their own

business

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businesses

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.

In addition

, using

the

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public

money

to distribute phone and

internet

access

is just wasting public

money

for free. As I have mentioned in the paragraph above, resolving the

issue

of joblessness with phones and

internet

access

isn’t a

way

to advocate

people

to look for

jobs

. If the government wants to put in use the public

money

for the development of the country, I suggest using it to improve other aspects of society

such

as infrastructure, public health, and education. By improving

such

aspects of the country, it can indirectly alleviate the

issue

of

unemployment

.

Although

the result might not be seen suddenly it will surely be mitigated as time passes by. To conclude, the best

way

to handle the problem of

unemployment

is to create new

jobs

or construct campaigns

which

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persuade

people

to find

jobs

.

Moreover

, enhancing other components in society can be more efficient than just handing out jobless

people

smartphones and

access

to the

internet

.