In some cities, government has tried to tax owners of the vehicles, for example to reduce the traffic congestion. Do you think it is a positive or negative impact?

In a large number of countries the world over, the general public is suffering a lot from traffic jams. Resultantly, some governments have taken a step to impose a high levy on
cars’
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owners
in order to reduce traffic
congestions
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. I,
nonetheless
, deem that
this
decision would surely have detrimental repercussions. Among the ratiocination to buttress my stance,
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one that deals with the significance of not enforcing an excess
tax
on
owners
of the vehicles as a way of stabilizing the price of final products.
In other words
, if authorities levy a high charge on
cars’
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owners
, the transportation cost of food and other products increases substantially, causing many customers to cut their budgets.
For example
, in 2009, when the
government
of Singapore raised the
tax
of
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cars’
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so as to control pollution and contain traffic jams, the price of daily consumable products increased twofold,
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dissatisfaction towards the
government
in that people were not able to bear the excess costs.
Hence
, the decision of raising taxes for
cars’
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owners
would indubitably have negative ramifications. Another critical rationale in reference to why the increasing
tax
of
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cars’
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owners
will not bring any positive result is necessarily synonymous with having no significant impact on their lifestyle. To be more precise, a person, who has the ability to buy a car, to spend money on petrol, drivers and so
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forth, can easily pay the taxes imposed by the
government
with a view to maintaining his present style of living.
As a consequence
,
this
step would cause problems only for the general people who have to pay more fares
in
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public
transportations
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.
For instance
, in 2019, India’s
government
charged a high
tax
on
cars’
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owners
which increased the gap between haves and have-nots. In conclusion, inasmuch as the decision
of raising
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taxes for
vehicles’
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owners
will increase the price of
foods
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and will have no impact on rich people, it would undoubtedly have negative consequences.
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