Some people think that criminals should be given longer terms in prison, so as to reduce the crime rate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals consider that lawbreakers might
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in
imprisonment
for
long
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time,in order to decline the crime rate.
Although
,
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strict punishment can
creates
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fear among
offenders
,I believe that
,
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other methods can be used to mitigate
this
issue. To commence with,
imprisonment
is helpful to decrease the crime rate, because it creates fear among criminals,they will think twice before committing
further
crime
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.It makes streets free from
offenders
. To justify it, a survey was conducted in South Africa and seen that
large
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no of criminals put into sentences which decline 80%
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mishappenings
.
Moreover
,
imprisonment
is
only
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solution to control the temper of the
offenders
and
also
to realize
them
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about
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their mistakes,so that they avoid
to harm
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others On the opposite side, other ways should be used to handle
this
issue.
Firstly
,
rehabilitation
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a rehabilitation
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centre
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should be introduced to provide
cuncelling
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counselling
to criminals,it helps to expel negative thoughts from the brain of
offenders
.
Secondly
,
government
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the government
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should create awareness about laws against misdoing and
penalty
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penalties
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should be imposed.
Also
, authorities should increase
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literacy
litrecy
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the litrecy
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rate, so that people can get
well paid
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jobs for their living and avoid committing crimes. To conclude,
although
sending them
in
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imprisonment
is a permanent solution
of
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the problem;
however
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I believe that government should make people aware
about
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laws
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the laws
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and
also
provide job opportunities.
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