Pie charts shows the electricity production in France and Australia in 1980 and 2000.

The pie charts visualize the

units

of

electricity

generation in Australia and France by using different kinds of fuels between 1980 and 2000. Overall, it had been noticed that, in both the years, Australia had

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on coal as

themain

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the main

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source

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of

electricity

production

.

On the contrary

, France was using all the available sources of fuels at the beginning but, when years later they started to depends on nuclear

power

as their main root for

electricity

production

.

First

of all, in both the countries the total

electricity

production

had increased significantly. To elaborate, in Australia during 1980 the total

production

of

electricity

was 100

units

. In that, 50% was produced by using coal. At the same time, the remaining half had been generated by using natural gas,

hydro

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hydropower

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power

and oil.

Furthermore

, in the year 2000,

totally

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170

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of 170

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units

were generated, in that, more than three fourth were depended on coal and the remaining

one fourth

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of the total

units

were generated with the help of

hydro

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hydropower

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power

, natural gas and oil.

In addition

, the noticeable thing is they

were not used

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have not used

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the nuclear

power

source.