The pie charts visualize the
units
of Use synonyms
electricity
generation in Australia and France by using different kinds of fuels between 1980 and 2000.
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Overall
, it had been noticed that, in both Linking Words
the
years, Australia had Correct article usage
apply
depends
on coal asWrong verb form
depended
themain
source of Correct your spelling
the main
electricity
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production
. Use synonyms
On the contrary
, France was using all the available sources of fuels at the beginningLinking Words
but
, Correct word choice
apply
when
years later they started to Correct word choice
but
depends
on nuclear Wrong verb form
depend
power
as their main root Use synonyms
for
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of
electricity
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production
.
First of all, in both Use synonyms
the
countries the total Correct article usage
apply
electricity
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production
had increased significantly. To elaborate, in Australia during 1980 the total Use synonyms
production
of Use synonyms
electricity
was 100 Use synonyms
units
. Use synonyms
In
that, 50% was produced by using coal. At the same time, the remaining half had been generated by using natural gas, Change preposition
Of
hydro
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hydropower
power
and oil. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, in the year 2000, Linking Words
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a totally
totally
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total
170
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of 170
units
were generated, in that, more than three fourth Use synonyms
were
Unnecessary verb
apply
depended
on coal and the remaining Replace the word
dependent
one fourth
of the total Add a hyphen
one-fourth
units
were generated with the help of Use synonyms
hydro
Correct your spelling
hydropower
power
, natural gas and oil. Use synonyms
In addition
, the noticeable thing is they Linking Words
were not used
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have not used
the
nuclear Correct article usage
a
power
source.Use synonyms