The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In England,it was noted by the civilians that there had been massive leverage in the figure of private automobile vehicles on the roads in the 20th century, compared to the

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day of its deployment.

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, certain populace believes that the citizens ought to opt for other commuting systems and the government need to form a new global statute for the car's

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as well as for its usages.

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essay completely agrees with the statement.I believe that

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strategy will alleviate the air

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and the present traffics. To commence with,in my opinion, deploying public commute systems

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of

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private vehicles will directly mitigate the generation of air

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.To specify, the massive surge in population

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ensued in

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rise in carbon

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emission

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,compare to

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private vehicles,the public transport

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commuters

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as trains, metros, buses and flights are evidence to release less

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in our environment.

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method will

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delay the

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warming of the earth.

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in Australia evidence that the increased public cycling stand has succoured in reducing

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atmospheric

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by 20%within 2 years.

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,there have been

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amount of

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impediments which is feasible to halt,if a single car

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statute is embarked for all the countries.It is well known that owing to the lack of stringent norms on the number of private cars own by each person,there

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been daily growth in

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hindrances.

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of a new norm

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will incrementally reduce the existing

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congestion path on the roads.To exemplify,an eminent environmentalist from England has said that the

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step to minimize the rise in

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is to

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a common law on

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. To conclude, in my opinion,the usage of other transportation sources will not only reduce

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environment

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pollution

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mitigate the exorbitant existing

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obstacles.

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, a proper law on

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vehicle

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should be encouraged by all the authorities.