As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual well being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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advertisement or not.
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product
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with no need for
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there are lots of
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purpose but each of them having different characteristics.
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a bath shop, there are hundreds of shops
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from
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of brands. How
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come to know which one suits your needs?
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a simple answer to
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consumer
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to choose
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from different ranges. With the help of
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customers can update
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them selves
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with
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market trends, offers and discounts. On
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side,
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of
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are misleading the
end users
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, some
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showing that by using their
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a customer can fair their skin colour. Most of
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done
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by famous
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are spending millions of dollar in
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, They should rather spend
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prices. To conclude,
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to compare different
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that
suit
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their needs. It
have
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been found that some misleading
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harming customers.
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compare to
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