Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is best to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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over the times about it is the best to accept a bad
situation
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best to try and improve situations. both of
this
view point
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will be discussed in the
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before the conclusion is reached On the one hand, which is the opinion that it is best to accept a bad
situation
. I believe that
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those people who believe in
this
opinion might have some idea that even though it's a hard time, but it will not stay with us forever and it will be better if we keep ours head down and focus on what we do right now
then
wait until the bad thing is gone.
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, those who argue with the idea that it is
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best to accept a bad
situation
which they believe about if we do not try to improve the
situation
might think that if we have a problem, why we need to wait until it is gone, why can't we try to do anything to make
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go faster than just sit and wait. In conclusion, we knew about both opinion and from my own point of view, I think that both opinions are good but depends on
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that
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to us, like if the
situation
we can't do anything about it
then
we should patient about it and wait until the opportunity that we can try to do something or improve something that it will make the
situation
better than now.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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