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Some people believe that it is the responsibility of individuals to take care of their own health and diet. Others, however, believe that government should make sure that their citizens have a healthy diet. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Maintaining a healthy
lifestyle
 and diet is something that individuals need to be
catious
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cautious
 about,
although
 many argue that governments
also
 have a duty to ensure the public is obliging certain health etiquettes. As far as I am concerned, regulations could only encourage
people
, while it is ultimately the
responsibilty
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responsibility
 of each person to look after their physical and mental well-being. On the one hand, governments could assist the public towards
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healthier nutrition through taxation on unhealthy foods, and subsidising fresh produce.
For instance
,
McDonalds
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 and other
fast food
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 chains owe their popularity not only to how delicious their meals are but
also
 their affordable pricing.
Therefore
, an increase in the price of
such
 products could roll back its demand.
However
,
this
 tactic has proved itself wrong in the case of tobacco and alcohol in many countries. Many
people
 still smoke and drink regardless of the cost as they enjoy the addictive thrill once they are hooked consumption.
On the other hand
, a health-conscious mindset is something that needs to be acquired at
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 level in order to become a
lifestyle
 model for
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society. To illustrate, in recent years many have decided to exercise at gymnasiums and
consequently
 have become more aware and careful about their daily diets which obviously means spending more money
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 their health.
Hence
, it can be argued that once
people
 are willing to transform their
lifestyle
, other factors
such
 as budgeting become of minor importance. In conclusion, there are opposing views on the topic of spreading a healthy
lifestyle
 and diet in a society. I believe that governments should only provide guidance for
people
 as persuasion works best, whereas
coersion
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coercion
 has shown to be obsolete.
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