Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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One of the highly controversial issues today relates to
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.
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from the sun is becoming famous increasingly
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as house
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worldwide. In
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essay, I will explain both sides of view. There are reasons why using solar
energy
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is becoming popular.
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of all,
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tend to take care of
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the planet
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. According to
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, the world temperature is getting increased about 1.5
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from 50 years ago.
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are always watching about
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matter and they have to review their
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and routine.
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, it is one of the
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for residences to take part in preservation. When the
people
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using recycle
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in the house, they can feel participate in keeping earth project. There is no doubt that using solar panels have some benefits.
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with, it is easy to install our house. Recently, when
people
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purchase or rent their home, the provider urge to purchase solar
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panel
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panels
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which supply
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them
discount
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the discount
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price.
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,
people
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are able to cut down
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expenditure.
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,
this
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panel
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can produce much more
energy
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for us during
use
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other
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of other
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equipment.
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, water, wind power, there are hard to equip and provide less
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than
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power.
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,
solar
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panel
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has some demerits.
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, it
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on
weather
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. If the cloudy continues for long days,
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system cannot absorb the sun and save much
energy
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to use electricity.
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,
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panel
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a panel
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of solar takes high primary and
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costs.
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means that when
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want to attach the
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, it spends a lot of money. After the installing,
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panels are fragile structures. As for
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problem,
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tend to repair it at least once within two years.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Renewable energy
  • Subsidies
  • Tax credits
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Efficiency
  • Off-grid
  • Carbon footprint
  • Climate change
  • Initial investment
  • Energy security
  • Sustainability
  • Decarbonization
  • Grid parity
  • Feed-in tariff
  • Energy storage systems
  • Payback period
  • Net metering
  • Silicon panels
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