You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: • Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months • Say how your work could be done while you are away • Ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear
Mr.
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this
letter to express my interest in working at our Company’s Head office, situated in The US, for six months.
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for taking approvals for the travel plan as I feel it is important for the successful completion of the project.
I am looking forward to your positive response.
Yours sincerely,
Adam Smith.Add the particle
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite